Animated movie, Pokemon The Movie: I Choose You!

[Gaya87]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
When a young boy Ash Ketchum oversleeps on his 10th birthday, he ends up with a stubborn Pikachu. But after a rocky start, Ash and Pikachu become close friends and true partners and when they catch a rare glimpse of the Legendary Pokemon Ho-Oh in flight, they make plans to seek it out together, guided by the Rainbow Wing it leaves behind. Trainers Verity and Sorrel join Ash on his journey. When they are near their goal, the arrogant Cross—Charmander’s former trainer stands in their way.

Short summary
A young boy dreams of earning the title of Pokemon Master. But after being late to pick up his first Pokemon on his tenth birthday he ends up with an unruly Pikachu, begins his life as a Pokemon Trainer.

 

[tedmc]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
When a young boy, Ash Ketchum, oversleeps on his 10th birthday, he ends up with a stubborn Pikachu. But after a rocky start, Ash and Pikachu become close friends and true partners and when they catch a rare glimpse of the Legendary Pokemon Ho-Oh in flight, they make plans to seek it out together, guided by the Rainbow Wing it leaves behind. Trainers Verity and Sorrel join Ash on his journey. When they are near their goal, the arrogant Cross, Charmander’s (who is this character?) former trainer, stands in their way.

Short summary
A young boy dreams of earning the title of Pokemon Master. But after being late to pick up his first Pokemon on his tenth birthday, he ends up with an unruly Pikachu and begins his life as a Pokemon Trainer.

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[Gaya87]

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I revised the last line:
When they are near their goal, an arrogant trainer named Cross stands in their way.