And please add a little bit more seasoning

[Pink_Flower]

I went to the Mariano's and asked them to grill salmon I bought. Does the following sound natural?

Would you please have/get this salmon grilled for me? I want it to be well-done! And please add a little bit more seasoning than you usually use!

 

[emsr2d2]

I went to [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Mariano's and asked them to grill the/some salmon I bought. Does the following sound natural?

Would you please [STRIKE]have/get this salmon grilled[/STRIKE] grill this salmon for me? I want it to be well-done! And please add a little bit more seasoning than you usually use!

See above. I'd end with "than usual".