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With all? digital devices at their fingertips, people nowadays want to limit their screen time more than they wanted a decade ago. Noticing this change, Amazon has launched a screenless fitness band called Amazon Halo. For many people, this product is better than other fitness trackers which can only increase their screen time.
With all? digital devices at their fingertips, people nowadays want to limit their screen time more than they wanted a decade ago. Noticing this change, Amazon has launched a screenless fitness band called Amazon Halo. For many people, this product is better than other fitness trackers which can only increase their screen time.