alpacinou
Key Member
- Joined
- Sep 30, 2019
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
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After walking for a few minutes, Nicole arrived. Taking off her shoes, she entered the house. They didn’t have a dining room. Their kitchen was at the corner of a small living room carpeted with an old, green rug. Her mom was in the kitchen, doing the dishes. “Where the hell have you been,” yelled Julia busy at the sink, washing a frying pan. “You are lucky your father isn’t home yet.” She turned her head and took a quick glance at Nicole, turned her head back towards the dishes, and back to Nicole again, staring at her with an open-mouth. She turned off the faucet and stepped towards her. Her tone changed when she looked at Nicole’s face. All the color had drained from her cheeks.
After walking for a few minutes, Nicole arrived. Taking off her shoes, she entered the house. They didn’t have a dining room. Their kitchen was at the corner of a small living room carpeted with an old, green rug. Her mom was in the kitchen, doing the dishes. “Where the hell have you been,” yelled Julia busy at the sink, washing a frying pan. “You are lucky your father isn’t home yet.” She turned her head and took a quick glance at Nicole, turned her head back towards the dishes, and back to Nicole again, staring at her with an open-mouth. She turned off the faucet and stepped towards her. Her tone changed when she looked at Nicole’s face. All the color had drained from her cheeks.