After she parked her car a few meters from the old house

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"After she parked her car a few meters from the old house where the course will take place, Camila walked determinedly towards the venue."


(I wrote the text).

 

[Barque]

I'd replace "will" with "was to" and "take place" with "be conducted" or "be offered" or "be taught".

It'd help if you gave us some context. What exactly does "course" refer to?

 

[Nikitus]

Dear Barque:

Is a leadership course.

 

[emsr2d2]

Dear Barque: You're not writing a formal letter.

It is a leadership course.

Remember to write complete sentences. Instead of trying to use "Dear Barque", as if you were writing a letter, it would have made more sense for you to quote Barque's post and reply underneath it.

 

[Tarheel]

Hello.

Is the following sentence grammatically correct?

"After she parked her car a few meters from the old house where the course was being taught, Camila walked determinedly towards the venue."


(I wrote the text).

The word "determinedly" suggests to me that she's getting ready to do something. (What that is I can only guess.)