advices for my article

[lucylulu]

my article is talk about "parents's attitude toward how children make friends" but I need more detail like how are their idea different from children, or what is your own ideas about making friends!
thank for your help:-D

 

[yoyoyo]

hi, I think most of parents may hope their kids can make friends with whom they call good student. but I think you have to know one people sincerely and realize his personalities this is important than everything!

 

[5jj]

my article (assignment?) is a/to talk about "parents's' attitude towards how children make friends" but I need more detail like how are their ideas different from children's, or what [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE]are your own ideas about making friends!
thank for your help:-D

Is this a homework assignment? If so, it should be your own ideas, not ours.