[General] Accent tryout

[cosby]

Hey guys,
I'd like you to listen to my accent and tell me does it sound natural to you ? or a little over the top ? what should I work on ?
Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/mohammed-al-hazmi/accent-tryout/s-01awm

 

[Tdol]

It sounds very good to me- easy to follow and pretty natural. :up:

 

[emsr2d2]

Hey guys,
I'd like you to listen to my accent and tell me [strike]does[/strike] if it sounds natural to you or a little over the top. What should I work on?
Thanks.

https://soundcloud.com/mohammed-al-hazmi/accent-tryout/s-01awm

I agree with Tdol about your accent.

Please note my corrections to your post above. Your first sentence wasn't a question so a question mark was inappropriate. Remember to start every sentence with a capital letter and that we don't put a space before a full stop, comma, question mark or exclamation mark. End every sentence with a single, appropriate punctuation mark, even a sentence as short as "Thanks".

 

[cosby]

Thank you Tdol and emsr2d2 for the comments and the corrections.
Have you got any advise for me to improve my accent ?
Is there anything specifically I should work on ?

Thanks again.