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How should I arrange the words in the sentence below?
1. Suddenly, a voice was heard coming from outside the room.
2. Suddenly, a voice coming from outside the room was heard.
I think Option #2 is better, because Option #1 sounds as if you didn't necessarily hear the voice but rather the action of the voice coming from outside the room, as if the voice was an entity.
Any help?
1. Suddenly, a voice was heard coming from outside the room.
2. Suddenly, a voice coming from outside the room was heard.
I think Option #2 is better, because Option #1 sounds as if you didn't necessarily hear the voice but rather the action of the voice coming from outside the room, as if the voice was an entity.
Any help?