A Thai Movie: The Promise

[Gaya87]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
In 1997, two best friends Ib and Boum vow to commit suicide together after their families are hit by the economic downturn in Thailand. After seeing Ib end her own life at the unfinished tower, Boum reneges on her promise. Now, twenty years later, Boum, a successful entrepreneur, comes back to the tower with her daughter Bell, only to find out that Ib is waiting for her to fulfil her words.

Short summary
After their family faced with bankruptcy, two best friends Ib and Boum vow to commit suicide together. In the end, Ib died all alone. 20 years later, Ib’s vengeful spirit returns to haunt Boum.

 

[teechar]

Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
In 1997, two best friends Ib and Boum vow to commit suicide together after their families are hit by the economic downturn in Thailand. After seeing Ib end her own life at the unfinished tower, Boum reneges on her promise. Now, twenty years later, Boum, a successful entrepreneur, comes back to the tower with her daughter, Bell, only to find out that Ib's ghost is waiting for her to fulfil her words.

Short summary
After their [STRIKE]family[/STRIKE] families are faced with bankruptcy, two best friends Ib and Boum vow to commit suicide together. In the end, Ib [STRIKE]died[/STRIKE] dies all alone. But 20 years later, Ib’s vengeful spirit returns to haunt Boum.

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