A Tamil Movie Magalir Mattum

[Gaya87]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long
Three best friends who have been separated after their school days, reunite once again after 36 years, with the help of Prabha, a bold documentary filmmaker. All the three women in their 50's have buried their dreams and sacrificed happiness & freedom, despite the pressures put upon them by the men in their lives. With the help of Facebook, Prabha unites the three friends and go on a road trip to kindle their good memories and also to provide them a liberating experience.

Short
A progressive-minded documentary filmmaker brings together three older women who have been separated since college and takes them on a journey of self discovery and boundless freedom.

 

[tedmc]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long
Three best friends who have been separated after their school days reunite once again after 36 years, with the help of Prabha, a bold, documentary filmmaker. All the three women in their 50's have buried their dreams and sacrificed happiness & freedom despite(do you mean "due to" here?) the pressures put upon them by the men in their lives. With the help of Facebook, Prabha unites the three friends and go on a road trip to rekindle their good memories and also to provide them a liberating experience.

Short
A progressive-minded documentary filmmaker brings together three older women who have been separated since college and takes them on a journey of self-discovery and boundless freedom.

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[Gaya87]

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Yes, Shall I omit the word despite and replace with " due to"?