A story for the student magazine.

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Please check my story for the school magazine.

The story.


Emma could not believe what she saw in front of her. She had been sitting in the classroom for the last two hours, not thinking about anything except her history exam. Then suddenly, feeling that something was not right, she had raised her eyes from the exam paper. The classroom had completely disappeared.



Emma found herself standing in front of an old giant stone wall. At first, she was feeling very frightened and she could not believe her eyes. But then, she assumed that she had fainted and now her imagination was playing with her. So she walked along the wall and ran into an ancient warrior. She was really curious and asked him what year it was and it turned out that her exam paper was about the very same year. Without hesitation, Emma asked the warrior all exam questions. As soon as he answered them, Emma found herself in the classroom and immediately wrote down all the answers.


Finally, Emma left the classroom with her friends. They were chatting happily but she knew after what she had been through, her life would never be the same again.
Two weeks later, Emma discovered that she had passed her history exam and she felt very pleased with herself.

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Please check my story for the school magazine.

The story.


Please check my story for the school magazine.

The story.


Emma could not believe what she saw in front of her. She had been sitting in the classroom for [STRIKE]the last[/STRIKE] two hours, not thinking about anything except her history exam. Then suddenly, feeling that something was not right, she [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] raised her eyes from the exam paper. The classmates had completely disappeared.


Emma found herself standing in front of an old giant stone wall. At first, she was feeling very frightened and she could not believe her eyes. But then, she realized that she had fainted and [STRIKE]then[/STRIKE] her imagination was playing with her. So she walked along the wall and ran into an ancient warrior. She was really curious and asked him what year it was and it turned out that her exam paper was about the very same year. Without hesitation, Emma asked the warrior all exam questions. As soon as he answered them, Emma found herself in the classroom and immediately wrote down all the answers.


Finally, Emma left the classroom with her friends. They were chatting happily but she knew after what had happened to her; her life would never be the same again.
Two weeks later, Emma noticed that she had passed her history exam and she felt very pleased with herself.

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