[Grammar] A song about a new life (please, help me to fix any mistakes)

[Trace Vaon]

Please help me to fix any mistakes in the lyrics of this song



ohhh, do you think it's true?
Colors are not the same
Something has really changed
Now you can run again, shout at the wind, laught at the tree,
show your smile, throw away the fear, rise up the head

Ohhh, the worst is behind us,
Show your pride again,
hold on tight
Now you can run again, shout at the wind, laught at the tree,
show your smile, throw away the fear, rise up the head

It's a season 2 -come on run through -it’s your life, man!
Don't be afraid of change -let bygones be bygones -it’s time now , welldone guy

ohhh, do you think it's true?
People are not the same
Something has really changed
Now you can run again, shout at the wind, laught at the tree,
show your smile, throw away the fear, rise up the head

It's a season 2 -come on run through -it’s your life, man!
Don't be afraid of change -let bygones be bygones -it’s time now

{"Season 2" looks like a tv series season, something that changes}

 

[emsr2d2]

I don't have time to really look at it, but you certainly need to fix the spelling of "laugh", and "well done" should be two words. And "rise up the head" doesn't really work, even given the fact that song lyrics don't have to be grammatical.

 

[Trace Vaon]

Hi everyone,
please, could someone confirm me that the lyric needs only the adjustments as wrote by emsr2d2?
Something else?

Thank you!

 

[Raymott]

"Laugh at the trees" unless there's some specific tree that you're talking about.
"well done" is two words.

 

[Trace Vaon]

Hi,
one last help:
ohhh,
put your glass down,
you are no longer thirsty
Get up and be strong

 

[Raymott]

Yes, that's OK.