[General] a short letter.

[salward]

Can you please help me to correct/improve this letter?

Dear ,

I hope you enjoyed your short leave.

On Tuesday, I had emailed you some questions that we need some clarifications from your side.

I appreciate if we can meet today or on Sunday at 10 a.m. to talk about, we are more willing to adjust to another convenient time of your choice.

Please note that we are pressed for time with the above matter, therefore your prompt response would be highly appreciated.

Thank you for your consideration and your time.

 

[teechar]

Can you please help me to correct/improve this letter?

Dear ,

I hope you enjoyed your short leave.

On Tuesday, I [STRIKE]had[/STRIKE] emailed you some questions [STRIKE]that[/STRIKE] for which we need some clarifications from your side.

I would appreciate if we can meet today or on Sunday at 10 a.m. to talk about that. Alternatively, we [STRIKE] are more willing to adjust[/STRIKE] can reschedule to another convenient time of your choice.

However, please note that we are pressed for time with the above matter. Therefore your prompt response would be highly appreciated.

Thank you for your consideration and your time.

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