A security guard

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This is the first paragraph.

A security guard

My company gives a plan for the vacation. The following this plan, all of people will have on holiday at the sea. Every one also agree to join this plan. But there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. So I decide that I would became a security guard for some days.

Please correct my mistakes.
 
This is the first paragraph.

A security guard

My company gives a plan for the vacation. I don't know what this means.

The following this plan, all of people will have on holiday at the sea. I have underlined errors. Try again.

Every one also agree to join this plan. I have underlined errors. Try again.

But there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. The punctuation is wrong. Can you work out why?

So I decide that I would became a security guard for some days. I have underlined errors. Try again.

See above.
 
A security guard

My company gives a plan for the vacation. I don't know what this means.
>>>It means the company will have a holiday for all staffs
The following this plan, all of people will have on holiday at the sea. I have underlined errors. Try again.
>>>Following this plan, people will have a holiday at the sea.
Every one also agree to join this plan. I have underlined errors. Try again.
>>>Everyone also agrees to join this plan.
But there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. The punctuation is wrong. Can you work out why?
>>>But, there is a little problem, no one will remain at the company as a security guard. (Actually, I don’t understand clearly about using the punctuation. Please explain to me)
So I decide that I would became a security guard for some days. I have underlined errors. Try again.
>>>So I decided that I would became a security guard for some days
 
Perhaps:

The company announced a plan/shedule for vacation days.

And:

Everyone agreed to the plan.

(I'm not sure what that means in that context.)

And:

Everybody decided to go to the beach.

And;

But there is a problem. The plant will be empty while everybody is on vacation.

And:

So I volunteer to become a security guard while everybody else is on vacation.
 
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