Ever Student
Senior Member
- Joined
- Aug 22, 2008
- Member Type
- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Hello,
Would you please make correction of the passage below?
Topic for writing:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"Actions speak louder than words"
use specific reasons and examples to support your response:
"Paragraph I"
I agree with this saying. As this behavior is simply seen in each large or small society, from a small family to the governmental organizations. We can often find out our relatives, especially our parents do not as they say. It is the same as a slogan that they use it but they will not do as they promise. For instance, the parents give a promise to their kids that they will buy for them a special toy or toys; however, they will easily forget what they have said to their children before.
It will continue......
Would you please make correction of the passage below?
Topic for writing:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
"Actions speak louder than words"
use specific reasons and examples to support your response:
"Paragraph I"
I agree with this saying. As this behavior is simply seen in each large or small society, from a small family to the governmental organizations. We can often find out our relatives, especially our parents do not as they say. It is the same as a slogan that they use it but they will not do as they promise. For instance, the parents give a promise to their kids that they will buy for them a special toy or toys; however, they will easily forget what they have said to their children before.
It will continue......