toanhntm
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This is my fifth attempt at writing in English. Please correct any mistakes you find.
A party
Kathy is driving to the party which it is organized on a mountain. Just a few days ago, she refused attending for the party by telling her friends she had to work on her application, but they insisted that she needed a break and the party was (is) a best place for her to relax. She finally agreed.
Kathy’s car crawls on a road to the party. The road was made by tiny stones. It is winding and leads to a small mountain. Kathy has never seen it before. Sitting in the car, Kathy sees two sides of the road is totally white. It was even warm yesterday, but it is snow today and gets colder. The wind is stronger and stronger. Kathy turns her car left to a small road and stops in front of a cabin.
She gets out of her car and heads to the door of cabin. She knocks the door. No one answers. She tries to knock one more time. No one is here. It is eight o’clock, the party must start a half hour ago. She checks the address in her notebook and it matches the one painted on the sign next to the door. Kathy asks herself that why is no one here?
Kathy hears a sound right behind her. She turns around and sees a young man who wears a ski coat. He gets out of the truck and walks up to Kathy.
The man asks: “Are you here for the party?”.
“Yes”, Kathy answers and gives him a question “Is this right place?”
“Yes, but the party was cancelled. No one informs you?”
“ No, nobody knows I am coming”
The man opens the door and invites Kathy in.
“That is a terrible day. You can’t go out with a snow storm that. By the way, I am Parton”
Kathy looks out through the window. The snow drops heavily outside. Her car is covered by snow. It looks like a cake cream. The recent days, she has worked on her application so she hasn’t had much time to notice the weather.
“I am Kathy” Kathy says.
Parton invites Kathy to sit down a chair and they begin to talk each other.
By the way, my grammar is not good. I think, by writing a lot in English, I can learn both kinds of various grammars and new words.
A party
Kathy is driving to the party which it is organized on a mountain. Just a few days ago, she refused attending for the party by telling her friends she had to work on her application, but they insisted that she needed a break and the party was (is) a best place for her to relax. She finally agreed.
Kathy’s car crawls on a road to the party. The road was made by tiny stones. It is winding and leads to a small mountain. Kathy has never seen it before. Sitting in the car, Kathy sees two sides of the road is totally white. It was even warm yesterday, but it is snow today and gets colder. The wind is stronger and stronger. Kathy turns her car left to a small road and stops in front of a cabin.
She gets out of her car and heads to the door of cabin. She knocks the door. No one answers. She tries to knock one more time. No one is here. It is eight o’clock, the party must start a half hour ago. She checks the address in her notebook and it matches the one painted on the sign next to the door. Kathy asks herself that why is no one here?
Kathy hears a sound right behind her. She turns around and sees a young man who wears a ski coat. He gets out of the truck and walks up to Kathy.
The man asks: “Are you here for the party?”.
“Yes”, Kathy answers and gives him a question “Is this right place?”
“Yes, but the party was cancelled. No one informs you?”
“ No, nobody knows I am coming”
The man opens the door and invites Kathy in.
“That is a terrible day. You can’t go out with a snow storm that. By the way, I am Parton”
Kathy looks out through the window. The snow drops heavily outside. Her car is covered by snow. It looks like a cake cream. The recent days, she has worked on her application so she hasn’t had much time to notice the weather.
“I am Kathy” Kathy says.
Parton invites Kathy to sit down a chair and they begin to talk each other.
By the way, my grammar is not good. I think, by writing a lot in English, I can learn both kinds of various grammars and new words.
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