A man is tasked to repair a CCTV

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If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.

Summary
A man is tasked to repair a CCTV camera at an old hospital. Unfortunately, he falls and loses consciousness, and receives treatment from the hospital. Soon, scary and weird events start to haunt him.

Summary
One night, Hariri is instructed by his boss to fix a CCTV camera at an old hospital. As he’s fixing it, he falls and not only injures himself, but also ends up unconscious. When he regains consciousness, he realises he has been admitted into the old hospital. Soon, he starts experiencing strange and creepy events.
 
Summary
A man is tasked to repair a CCTV camera at an old hospital. Unfortunately, he falls and loses consciousness, and receives treatment from the hospital. Soon, scary and weird events start to[STRIKE] haunt[/STRIKE] happen to him. (things that haunt you are things that come back to you repeatedly after the first time)


Summary
One night, Hariri is instructed by his boss to fix a CCTV camera at an old hospital. As he’s fixing it, he falls and not only injures himself, but also ends up unconscious. When he regains consciousness, he realises he has been admitted into the old hospital. Soon, he starts experiencing strange and creepy events.
 
Haunt can mean make someone feel worried and upset for a long time (http://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/american/haunt_1). It is perfectly acceptable in that sentence.

1) Soon, scary and weird events start happen to him.
2)
Soon, scary and weird events start haunt to him.
3)
Soon, scary and weird events start to haunt him.

So, which one of these is grammatically correct?
 
1) Soon, scary and weird events start to happen to him.
2)
Soon, scary and weird events start to haunt [STRIKE]to[/STRIKE] him.
 
He is tasked with repairing a CCTV camera.
 
If there are any grammatical mistakes, please let me know. Thank you.

Summary
A man is tasked [STRIKE]to repair[/STRIKE] with repairing a CCTV camera at an old hospital. Unfortunately, he falls, [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] loses consciousness and [STRIKE]receives treatment from the[/STRIKE] gets admitted to that hospital. Soon, scary and weird events start to haunt him.

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One night, Hariri is instructed by his boss to fix a CCTV camera at an old hospital. As he's fixing it, he falls and not only injures himself, but also ends up unconscious. When he regains consciousness, he realises he has been admitted into the old hospital. Soon, he starts experiencing strange and creepy events.

See above.
 
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