A Malay Movie- Sindikit

[Gaya87]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Description
Inspector Rudy form Special Unit D7 works tirelessly to eradicate human trafficking. The death of a 16 year old girl provides a lead that helped police to hunt down a highly wanted human trafficking syndicate in Malaysia. A fight ensued between police and the group in which a few of the group members were shot down by police. However the group leader, Galang managed to flee and he brought along Noreen, Amira and Yanti, the victims.

Short Description
A police officer, Inspector Rudy works hard to eradicate human trafficking by hunting down a big syndicate that is involved in this menace.

 

[teechar]

Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Description
Inspector Rudy form Special Unit D7 works tirelessly to eradicate human trafficking. The death of a 16-year-old girl provides a lead that helps police to hunt down a highly wanted human trafficking syndicate in Malaysia. A fight ensues between the police and the group, in which a few of the group members [STRIKE]were[/STRIKE] are shot [STRIKE]down[/STRIKE] by the police. However the group leader, Galang, manages to flee, and he [STRIKE]brought[/STRIKE] takes along Noreen, Amira and Yanti, who are some of the victims.

Short Description
A police officer, Inspector Rudy, works hard to eradicate human trafficking by hunting down a big syndicate that is involved in this menace.

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