A Malay Movie, Busker

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Gaya87

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Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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Adil and Vera who didn't have a good impression towards each other initially, until they are forced to work together on college project, and start to get really close to each other. It turns out that Adil is trying to get back up after being dumped by his girlfriend Mel, so Vera suggests that he joins a busking competition to win back Mel's heart. But as they spend more and more time together, Vera starts to develop feelings for Adil. Will Adil and Vera remain friends for ever?

Short summary
Vera, a student falls in love with her college friend, Adil. But Adil sees her only as his friend, and he is trying to get back up after being dumped by his girlfriend. Will Adil fall in love with Vera?
 
Hi, can someone please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Adil and Vera [STRIKE]who[/STRIKE] didn't have a good impression [STRIKE]towards[/STRIKE] of each other initially, until they [STRIKE]are[/STRIKE] were forced to work together on a college project and start to get really close to each other. It turns out that Adil is trying to get back up after being dumped by his girlfriend Mel, so Vera suggests that he joins a busking competition to win back Mel's heart. But as they spend more and more time together, Vera starts to develop feelings for Adil. Will Adil and Vera remain friends for ever?

Short summary
Vera, a student falls in love with her college friend, Adil. But Adil sees her only as his friend, and he is trying to get back up after being dumped by his girlfriend. Will Adil fall in love with Vera?
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