grammarfreak
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I was confined in a hospital for 10 days with serious problem in my Gall Bladder and I gave a letter of gratitude to the doctor who assisted to me in spanish. As an english student interested in grammar I made a translation into english of that letter ; I want to know if there are some errors in the translation I did. This is the letter in spanish, and the english letter is next. Both letters are as follows :
25 de enero, 2012
Santo Domingo
Dr. Wenceslao Figuereo
Hospital General Regional Dr. Marcelino Vélez Santana
Su despacho.,
Distinguido doctor :
Sirva la presente para extenderle un cordial y grato saludo y a la vez expresarle los siguientes :
Agradezco sinceramente la demostración de aprecio y solaridad que tras mi padecimiento de salud, recibí de distinto personal de enfermería y, en especial al trato humano y fraternal que usted siempre me brindó.
Dejo también constancia de gratitud por las muestras de preocupación expresadas y por las atenciones del personal médico durante el reciente problema de salud que motivó mi internamiento; además pido disculpa y perdón por los inconvenientes que causé en algunas ocasiones.
Las más sentidas gracias.
Queda de usted muy atentamente,
Yulián Castillo Castillo
TRANSLATION :
January 25th., 2012
Santo Domingo
Dr. Wenceslao Figuereo
General Regional Hospital Dr. Marcelino Vélez Santana
His office.,
Dear doctor :
Hereby, I am extending you a grateful and warming greeting; at the same time I want to express the followings :
I am sincerely thanked for the demonstration of esteem and solidarity that I received from the various members of the nursery staff after my ilness, especially the human and fraternal treatment that you always offered to me.
I also let my constancy of gratitude for the signs of preoccupation and for the attentions that the medical staff showed during my recent health problem that caused my confinement; moreover I apologize and beg your pardon for the inconvenients I could may have caused in several occasions.
With the deepest thanks.
Very sincerely yours,
Yulián Castillo Castillo
I would appreciate any assistant, All I want is to improve my english grammar.
Thanks
Grammarfreak
25 de enero, 2012
Santo Domingo
Dr. Wenceslao Figuereo
Hospital General Regional Dr. Marcelino Vélez Santana
Su despacho.,
Distinguido doctor :
Sirva la presente para extenderle un cordial y grato saludo y a la vez expresarle los siguientes :
Agradezco sinceramente la demostración de aprecio y solaridad que tras mi padecimiento de salud, recibí de distinto personal de enfermería y, en especial al trato humano y fraternal que usted siempre me brindó.
Dejo también constancia de gratitud por las muestras de preocupación expresadas y por las atenciones del personal médico durante el reciente problema de salud que motivó mi internamiento; además pido disculpa y perdón por los inconvenientes que causé en algunas ocasiones.
Las más sentidas gracias.
Queda de usted muy atentamente,
Yulián Castillo Castillo
TRANSLATION :
January 25th., 2012
Santo Domingo
Dr. Wenceslao Figuereo
General Regional Hospital Dr. Marcelino Vélez Santana
His office.,
Dear doctor :
Hereby, I am extending you a grateful and warming greeting; at the same time I want to express the followings :
I am sincerely thanked for the demonstration of esteem and solidarity that I received from the various members of the nursery staff after my ilness, especially the human and fraternal treatment that you always offered to me.
I also let my constancy of gratitude for the signs of preoccupation and for the attentions that the medical staff showed during my recent health problem that caused my confinement; moreover I apologize and beg your pardon for the inconvenients I could may have caused in several occasions.
With the deepest thanks.
Very sincerely yours,
Yulián Castillo Castillo
I would appreciate any assistant, All I want is to improve my english grammar.
Thanks
Grammarfreak
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