Silverobama
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- Aug 8, 2010
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- Student or Learner
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- Chinese
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- China
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- China
I wrote a short paragraph about my friend, please help me to correct it.
A friend of mine who went to a mountain resort to shoot ads had lost contact with me; she didn't reply to my messages for two days. Today, when I was about to call the police, she showed up and told me she was very busy.
Shoot ads: She's a hanfu (a kind of traditional clothes of Han dynasty) model and she went to the mountain resort to shoot some ads or films for her company. The mountain resort is snowing now.
Lost contact with me: she didn't reply my message. I thought she had "transpired" in the world.
A friend of mine who went to a mountain resort to shoot ads had lost contact with me; she didn't reply to my messages for two days. Today, when I was about to call the police, she showed up and told me she was very busy.
Shoot ads: She's a hanfu (a kind of traditional clothes of Han dynasty) model and she went to the mountain resort to shoot some ads or films for her company. The mountain resort is snowing now.
Lost contact with me: she didn't reply my message. I thought she had "transpired" in the world.