A decription of the Death Valey.Could someone check a grammally in below sentence,...

[Lê Thiên Hoàng]

Death National Park is the driest in the United States. It lies on eastern slope of a the mountain ranges of Sierra Nevada, California with spread to the part (Devil's Hole) of Nyem Nevada. I cover an area of 13.518 km2 and cover all Saline valley, A large part of the Panamint valley. This is a national park hottest, driest and having deepest point at the western hemisphere at Badwater. It has deep 282 feet with sea.
Could someone check a grammally in below sentence, please?

 

[tedmc]

Death National Park is the driest area in the United States. It lies on the eastern slopes of [STRIKE]a[/STRIKE] the mountain range[STRIKE]s[/STRIKE] of Sierra Nevada, California [STRIKE]with[/STRIKE] spreading to [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] part (Devil's Hole) of Nyem Nevada. It covers an area of 13.518 km2 [STRIKE]and cover all[/STRIKE] over Saline valley[STRIKE], A[/STRIKE] and a large part of the Panamint valley. [STRIKE]This[/STRIKE] It is [STRIKE]a national park[/STRIKE][STRIKE] the [/STRIKE] the hottest and driest national park [STRIKE]and having[/STRIKE] with the deepest point [STRIKE]at[/STRIKE] in the western hemisphere at Badwater, It [STRIKE]has deep 282 feet with sea[/STRIKE] at a depth of 282 feet below sea level.

Could someone check [STRIKE]a grammally in below sentence[/STRIKE] the above passage, please?

 

[emsr2d2]

I'm pretty sure it's called "Death Valley National Park", not "Death National Park" as your first three words describe it.

 

[tedmc]

Yes, "Death Valley" is stated in the title of the thread.
And, the title itself has three spelling mistakes.