bonkiteng
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- Jul 4, 2017
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Hi, I've always wanted to improve my English writing, would you please correct the mistakes in my text?
I work at after-school program at a private school in Taiwan. For most elementary school kids are enthusiastic, creative, and fully-energized, there are always a number of interesting stories to tell after a long day work.
Today, there came a couple auditing students. It not only meant that class is now bigger and filled with more laughters, but it also meant that, to me, a PAY RAISE might happen if I made the lesson fun and cheerful enough for them to stay. So I had to come up with a fun class activity. "Let's make a toy kite!" I thought. I immediately went and bought the material I needed from a stationery store nearby, namely a bag of sticks, glue, tape, huge pieces of pinkish blue and pinkish art paper, for boys and girls relatively, and bundles of jute thin ropes. I was a bit uptight because handling a larger-sized class isn't all that simple, but, fortunately, it turned out the class went amazingly well! While I introduced the steps to make a kite and gave out the material, students were eager to make their own kite cool and pretty. On the last step, we all sticked a foam polar bear shape on it and I got to lecture about the importance of being environmental-friendly. The kids loved it and both the students who sat in during class registered to my course afterwards. It was quite exhausting having to teach a bigger class, but at the end of the day, I felt satisfied.
I work at after-school program at a private school in Taiwan. For most elementary school kids are enthusiastic, creative, and fully-energized, there are always a number of interesting stories to tell after a long day work.
Today, there came a couple auditing students. It not only meant that class is now bigger and filled with more laughters, but it also meant that, to me, a PAY RAISE might happen if I made the lesson fun and cheerful enough for them to stay. So I had to come up with a fun class activity. "Let's make a toy kite!" I thought. I immediately went and bought the material I needed from a stationery store nearby, namely a bag of sticks, glue, tape, huge pieces of pinkish blue and pinkish art paper, for boys and girls relatively, and bundles of jute thin ropes. I was a bit uptight because handling a larger-sized class isn't all that simple, but, fortunately, it turned out the class went amazingly well! While I introduced the steps to make a kite and gave out the material, students were eager to make their own kite cool and pretty. On the last step, we all sticked a foam polar bear shape on it and I got to lecture about the importance of being environmental-friendly. The kids loved it and both the students who sat in during class registered to my course afterwards. It was quite exhausting having to teach a bigger class, but at the end of the day, I felt satisfied.