Gaya87
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- Jul 5, 2015
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Tamil
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- India
- Current Location
- Malaysia
Hi there, I really appreciate if someone please proofread my writing below. Thank you.
Short summary
Today, a 19-year-old’s request for death is granted. As the folklore says, you need to be prepared for the worst after a visit by Devil.
Long summary
Flora’s announcement for a death wish in her social media worries her friends, who later invite her for a gathering beside Jakarta’s Ciliwung River to cheer her up. She, however, later gets Devil as a visitor, who happily grants her death wish.
Short summary
Today, a 19-year-old’s request for death is granted. As the folklore says, you need to be prepared for the worst after a visit by Devil.
Long summary
Flora’s announcement for a death wish in her social media worries her friends, who later invite her for a gathering beside Jakarta’s Ciliwung River to cheer her up. She, however, later gets Devil as a visitor, who happily grants her death wish.