"The man looked in a mirror *while* he buttoned up his shirt."

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"The man looked in a mirror while he buttoned up his shirt." (Learn 1100 English Words with Illustrations)
Is WHILE the right word here? I think "while" refers to a period of time, so it usually goes with "be verbs" or is used in the progressive tense. How about I change it to WHEN? Will that be more natural?
 
While is fine. Buttoning up a shirt is not a punctual activity.
 
The word "while" is the perfect word there. Nothing would be more natural.

If it's in a book you can't change it.

What was the word being illustrated? Mirror?
 
The word "while" is the perfect word there. Nothing would be more natural.

If it's in a book you can't change it.

What was the word being illustrated? Mirror?
It was "button up".
 
The word "while" is the perfect word there. Nothing would be more natural.

You don't think as is just as good or better?
 
I suppose you could use "as," but the question wasn't about that.
 
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